On that day,I learn about Introduction of an essay..Miss zu explained and gave me exercise..Let me share what the Introductory paragraph...
The Parts of the Introductory Paragraph
n The Hook - Designed to grab attention immediately and give some indication about the essay’s topic
n The Transition - Moves the reader from the hook to the driving force of the essay….
The Thesis - Makes the contract with the reader about what will be discussed without a blatant announcement
Types of Hooks
1. Personal examples
2. Quotations
3. Facts or statistics
4. Rhetorical questions
5. Current events
6. Contrast to the thesis statement
7. Definition
Personal Examples
n Provides strong, dramatic incidents to use. Honesty in expressing thoughts and feelings will ring true with the reader. While you can make up the personal experience, be careful that it sounds credible.
n Personal observation - different from a personal example, an observation is something you saw happening.
Using Quotations
n Content of quote should be:
q Dramatic
q Emotionally appealing
q Surprising
q Humorous
n Quote does not have to be from a famous person
n Must be relevant to thesis statement
Using Facts or Statistics
n Must be startling or unusual
n Must be from a credible source
n Use journal as a place to record both quotes and facts or statistics that might work for an introduction
Using Rhetorical Questions
Example 1:
n Why is it that we continue to take Mother Nature for granted? Do we really need a catastrophe to occur before we actually stop our errant ways? Research has shown that global warming in now at a very dangerous level. If environmental pollution continues to go unchecked, it may not be long before disaster actually strikes. Hence, it is high time that we did something to stop global warming by cutting down on the use of chlorofluorocarbon (CFC), reducing the number of cars on the road and protecting our green lungs.
Using Current Events
n Must be recent
n Must be important
n Should be made public by newspapers, television, or radio
Using Contrast to the Thesis Statement
n In direct contrast to the thesis statement
n It’s fun to prove an expert wrong
Using Definition
Example:
n Haemorrhoids, or piles, are swollen and stretched-out veins which line the upper part of the anal canal and lower rectum. The first symptom is usually bleeding. If the haemorrhoids become larger and bleed during a bowel movement, they generally protrude through the anal canal and are visible as a lump. In this case, they are called ‘prolapsed’. External haemorrhoids is a condition in which a small blood vessel burst just under the surface of the skin at the opening of the anal canal. Regardless of type, haemorrhoids cause distress and embarrassment. They hurt, burn, itch, irritate the anal are, and often, bleed. To save ourselves from all this pain, it is good for us to know the factors which contribute to haemorrhoids and ways to avoid them